In the olden days, people didn’t find dates on Tinder or
other social media programs. They met potential mates at work, church, school, and
through friends and acquaintances, sometimes on blind dates. So, I was a bit
skeptical about where this book was going when the three protagonists thought
their “Referral Program” was something “new” that had to be kept secret.
Sadly, my opinion went downhill from there. The three
protagonists, Ivy, Brooke, and Dylan, where indistinguishable from one another.
They had different jobs, yes, but they were all beautiful, shapely, ambitious
black women with high expectations for relationships. But … they didn’t have anything
that differentiated them from each another. Likewise, the male characters they “referred”
to one another. All successful, handsome, wealthy, fit black men. Everyone was
experienced in dating and relationships, and suddenly, they all had the same
goals. Only one, discarded character was “less” –and that was because he was
nine years older and sold cars for a living (though of course, he owned three
dealerships.) Buzz words like Faith,
Integrity, Loyalty are present throughout, whether through the mouths of the
male characters, or the female.
First dates are painful for most people, tenuous at best,
especially blind dates. I hate to say the reader struggles through no fewer
than seven first dates in this novel, each painful. And when a couple finally
gets to sex, these bright, educated, mid-thirties women refer to their own
genitalia as “kitty” or “flower” and it was … for the reader…awful.
Finally, the author had trouble with point of view
throughout the book, jumping from one woman to the other …and since they were
indistinguishable in language or goals, it was difficult to follow. At one
point, we even switched to one of the men’s point of view mid chapter and without
warning. When anyone tried to have a conversation with a potential mate, the “dialogue”
turned into preachy monologue. Three lines from one character at a time is a
rule many writers have been taught. This one missed that lesson. It is not unusual
to read 10-12 lines with no break, and sometimes, honestly 22-25. I have no
sense of the setting and very little sense of the characters actions, habits, distinguishing
features, etc.
I hate to leave a less than stellar review, as I know it takes so
much to write a novel. I believe this writer has the skills to do a better job.
The book is The Referral Program, and it will be released August 29, 2023.
Thanks to the publisher, Atria Books and NetGalley for the review copy.